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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.
Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Background information: start one's own business or find a jobOpinion: better to find a job
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Topic sentence: there are many advantages to starting a businessReason 1: free entrepreneurial resources from both government and universities, including subsidies, tax exemption, free incubation centersReason 2: flexible working hours, financially successful
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Topic sentence: it is better to find a jobReason 1: a low-risk choice (fail vs exempt from financial worry)Reason 2: accumulate work experience, improve professional quality
Opinion: Despite advantages of entrepreneurship, should apply for a job
It is true that university graduates are faced with difficult choices between starting a business and finding a job. While working for themselves has many benefits, I think they should hunt for a job.
On the one hand, there are many advantages to starting a business. Firstly, many free entrepreneurial resources are available from both government and universities. For example, the government in Hubei province provides subsidies and tax exemption for entrepreneurs and many universities also offer free incubation centers. Other benefits include flexible working hours and the possibility to be financially successful.
On the other hand, I think it is better to find a job. The main reason is that this is a low-risk choice. Entrepreneurs are highly likely to fail due to a lack of practical experience. In contrast, by working for a company, one is exempt from the worry about losing the funds invested. In addition, one can accumulate work experience and improve professional qualities like teamwork spirit and problem-solving skills.
Despite the advantages of entrepreneurship, I believe graduates should apply for a job at a company.
上文中值得的学习高分topic-related words 有：
hunt for a job 找工作free entrepreneurial resources are available 有许多免费的创业资源provides subsidies and tax exemption for entrepreneurs 为创业者提供补贴和免税政策offer free incubation centers 提供免费的创业孵化中心flexible working hours and the possibility to be financially successful 灵活的工作时间，以及取得成功赚钱的可能性a low-risk choice 低风险的选择Entrepreneurs are highly likely to fail due to a lack of practical experience 创业者极有可能因缺乏实践检验而失败is exempt from the worry about losing the funds invested 不用担心失去投入的资金accumulate work experience and improve professional qualities like teamwork spirit and problem-solving skills 积累工作经验，提升职业素养，如团队合作精神和问题解决能力entrepreneurship 创业apply for a job 申请一份工作